December 20, 2010
English 263: The Vampire Novel - Final Project Paper
The Brides of Dracula
For my final project, I chose to draw the brides of Dracula. I chose this for a number of reasons. Dracula is a classic vampire story, and one that seemed to fall right in the middle of the semester for us. I enjoyed this because, to me, Dracula was kind of the "quintessential" vampire book. Not only was it innovative for its time, but it was so innovative that many of the things that it introduced to vampire fiction evolved into what are today considered to be conventions of the genre. One of these elements that Dracula seemed to introduce was the idea of using sexuality as a way to create a sense of fear about the vampires and what they can do to a person.
While sexuality in vampire fiction was more or less introduced to us in Dracula, it came up many times throughout the semester. However, as the books got more and more modern, I found that the sexual aspect of the stories became less and less subtle. I figure that it's just the way the genre is evolving. That is why I chose to draw the brides at somewhat of a halfway point between Dracula-age vampires and the vampires of today. While Stoker didn't come out and say that the brides of Dracula acted sexually, it was definitely implied. In my picture, however, I decided to take it in a more modern direction, where the woman are obviously drawn in a somewhat sexual way. To me, this is more where vampire fiction is today, which can be seen in things like True Blood and Twilight (although modern vampires do seem to have a certain level of romanticism to them.)
Another thing that I noticed about the sexuality in vampire fiction was that before we discussed it in class, I was totally oblivious to it. However, once we discussed it and I understood the concept a little better, it started to really effect the way I read into many aspects of the stories that we read. The way that I drew the brides of dracula are sort of how I imagined them once we discussed what they really represented, and it's relationship to Victorian society. It was an edgey concept to me, especially considering the time period in which Dracula was written, and I think the edge just grew and grew in my mind until all of the subtlety of the concept was gone.
One thing that I enjoyed about this project was the 1st person perpective of the picture, from John Harker's point of view. While I'm not an art student or anything, I thought that touches like that would really make the drawing more interesting. Along the same lines, I really enjoyed the reflection of John in the mirror. It provided a good oppurtunity to both make the picture a little more interesting, and an oppurtunity to touch a little bit on vampire folklore that was introduced in Dracula. More specifically, it was an oppurtunity to show that Dracula's brides had no reflection, which was another element from Dracula that has stood the test of time.
One part that I don't like about my project is the shading. I intended the picture to be in a dark room, with the only light coming in from the open door, but I was just unable to do that and I don't think it really came across very well. Another thing about the drawing that I would have changed if I could have was the way in which I drew the brides. One the one hand, I had never really tried to draw women before and I actually think it went alright--but on the other hand, what I was trying to show was a bit of a more subtle view of the sexuality of Dracula. Granted, I didn't want it as subtle as it was in the actual book--the point of the drawing was to illustrate them in a more modern sense of the word "sexual". However, I found it difficult to make them kind of seductive without making it super obvious. I guess I just don't have that kind of artistic touch, or maybe I just didn't give myself enough time to work out all of the kinks in this project.
The process of creating this project was pretty long. First, I outlined the things laying around the room because I knew that I wanted the picture to be from John's perspective, and I knew that might be tricky. After I did that, I outlined all of the women without hair or too many facial features. After that came the adding of details to the people and room, and the addition of some light shading. Overall, I think it started strong, but after working on it for a long time I started to just run out of ideas on how to improve it. When you're drawing on an 8x10 piece of drawing paper, it's not too hard to run out of space, either.
Overall, I think I'm happy with the way the project turned out. I think that it got across the sexuality that we found in the stories that we read throughout the semester, and I think that it is a decent representation of that scene from Dracula. But, while I feel like I covered as many bases as I could content-wise, I was a little disappointed by the final product. I'm a little bit of a perfectionist, and despite the fact that I enjoy the nice simple cartoony look that I gave it, I would have liked to have been able to create more atmosphere in the drawing (because I thought that that part of the book was very atmospheric and scary) through the use of shading and things like that.